This is my first attempt at a love poem in a long time...so i really appreicate every vote/comment i get. I want you to be honest. this was written for a friend who i definately have grown close to in these past few weeks.

Love you heather,

Signed,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior

Hailie is definatly right, i think it is the sweetest. beautiful love poem. very nice job!!! take care
*jacki*

Awe Shaun, thank you so much...this is so adorable, ya know I was smiling the whole time I was reading-right?- you're a great person...Love ya much!
I'll email you with more to say :)

With love,
Heather
ps. how could I give anything less than a 5?

I like your poems!

I've had a horrible night so i came back to read this to brighten my soul up a bit:) just wanted to say thanks again sweetheart! i love the last 2 couplets :) Love you Shaun!

Heather

Nice write Shaun, yet another beautiful poem. but i think "each day i couldn't wait for get an e-mail or two" should be "each day i couldn't wait *to* get an e-mail or two" or "each day i couldn't wait for geting an e-mail or two" (sorry if i am wrong, i am not good at the suggestion thing, but i am trying). God bless you two!

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit

Actually when we e-mailed back and forth it was just something talking about our poems or about how we were. When were we e-mailing back and forth it was just sort of as friends. Now i am IMGing her and talking to her that way. So it's sort of like looking back, even though i couldn't wait to get home and read the e-mails...we were only friends then so i didn't believe it.

If that makes sense?

I didn't realize you two didn't live close to eachother!!! AAAAWWWW that makes it even sweeter!!!! Nice write.....

It's nice to have someone who can brighten your day with a simple email...someone who can make you smile...this poem is beautiful (a few grammatical errors though).

xxx