by **Just Her** Mar 17, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
I vaguely remember |
Wow you made me cry... which never happens too often, i felt as if i were you living that nightmare and the ending was so perfect there's not even words to describe it! |
by Dorotea©
Very good poem, it reminds me of my best friend Grace. Very beautiful. The last lines were perfect and the flow was good. Keep writing, i really liked this poem. |
by Alex
Great poem. Such sadness. You really can put your emtions across really well. I really liked this verse: |
by Brookeღ
Another great poem but again it's so sad! U can really tell how u write with true emotion! Take Care! 5/5 |
wow this is sad |