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by Lisa D Larson
Jamin What a lucky girl!! Wonderful use of your thoughts! Lisa D. Larson
by Nat
I love the words u use, ur amazing with description!
by NyellMoonlight
Emotions in the whole poem are beautifully expressed and you described that girl greatly. The flow of the poem is excellent, with good rhyming scheme. Well done 5/5 from me