I luv ya both
by hidden under lies Mar 17, 2005
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You never let me down and you are never afraid to tell me the truth i love how your not afraid to say ANYTHING you know who you are, i haven't known you very long but it seems like i have you are always sweet to me, you both treat me so well and i try my best to make you feel the same way i know i may be a bi*** sometimes but i always say I'm sorry I'm lost without you stay with me and together we will stay strong |
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19 years ago
yea thanx fer the pointers they helped
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19 years ago
by Eibutsina
Nice poem. need to be careful of your lay out and presentation of your poetry. Also I think this would be suited to slang catergory but still a great piece, thanks for sharing hope you can work with my feedback :o)
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19 years ago
lol hey sammy lol are you gonna try to write poems or do you just want to leave comment? lol of course this poem is about you your my best friend you kick ass girl
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19 years ago
thanx both of you that means alot i really try my hardest and i thought this was one poem that i could acually express myself on thank you
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19 years ago
by Amanda
Yes excellently written!
