Yes excellently written!

thanx both of you that means alot i really try my hardest and i thought this was one poem that i could acually express myself on thank you

lol hey sammy lol are you gonna try to write poems or do you just want to leave comment? lol of course this poem is about you your my best friend you kick ass girl

Nice poem. need to be careful of your lay out and presentation of your poetry. Also I think this would be suited to slang catergory but still a great piece, thanks for sharing hope you can work with my feedback :o)

yea thanx fer the pointers they helped