Wow!!! Excellent write girl, as I read it
I got this vision of homeless people and
all the help they need. This line is way good,
“Stood aside, the fly in the ointment” great
line. Also in the 2nd stanza line two,
“No on can ever love me in this city”
>>>>^
is “one” the word may have left “e” out.
Wonderful read with smooth flow and
Great content. Write On!!!

Wow, This was very interesting but meaningful:) I loved it, jemma!! Great Work! God Bless You! *5/5*

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