by Erica Brown© Mar 17, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love, contagious to all living, |
by Jessica
hey, me again, ummmm, I took wat u said about my poem "You are....." into perspective nad I changed it up a little bit. I'd really appreciate if you would check it out and see my changes! |
by Jessica
1st, thnx 4 commenting on my poems. Second, I liked the story of your poem but I didn't think the poem itself flowed well enough. To make it a good poem it has to be easy for the reader to read and yours was a bit confusing! Liked it though. bye |