Do you care?

by Lost but Smiling   Mar 18, 2005


*HI, it's me Fake again...and guess what, it's time for a new story!!! YAY this one is called "Do you Care?" Please enjoy!

The night whipped around the man standing on the edge of the lake. The bright orange moon, lit up his handsome features. His soft eyes held hurt and pain. Like he had lost someone he cared for dearly. his lips were red. And his hands stained with blood. He couldn't believe he had done that. No, not to her. Not to the love of his life. Why did he do it. His memories began to drift to the first time he met her.
It was a dank day outside and the sun wasn't shining through at all. the air around him was wet. He needed blood. It wasn't often that the days were so overcast that he could go out and eat his fill. Today was lucky for him. Except that there seemed to be know one around. The man wandered the streets, his hunger growing. Pig and cow blood couldn't sustain him forever. He started to get frantic, which meant he was starting to lose attention of his surroundings. Which may have been the reason that he ran (literally) head on into her. When he looked down into the most beautiful blue eyes he had ever seen. Her hair was like black silk, long and flowing down her back, all the way to the top of her hip. She wasn't slim, but she wasn't fat, just right. Though she still curved where it counted. "Oh I am so sorry. Sir." She said.
The man looked around. No one. He could bite her...but something in his mind told him "NO"
"No problem Miss." he said quietly. trying to will his fangs to shrink back to normal size. "Are you lost sir?" she asked. her voice pure and happy, although it held a hint of childlike curiosity. "Yes ma'am. I'm looking for Planet Hollywood." he looked away embarrassed. She smiled, her smile was full and exposed pearly white teeth. Her smile was sweet and innocent, with a dimple on her left cheek. "That's where i work sir! I'll take you there!"
He looked dumbfounded, seeing his furrowed brow, the girl laughed slightly, "On one condition...Tell me your name."
"J-Jack Crashner."
She smiled again, "I'm Lily Meanowitz, It's a pleasure to meet you Jack!"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    heh, this will all be revealed as the story goes on...you'll see what happens...right now it's in a flashback mode. sorry, he's remembering back to when he first met the two who will change his life....mwhaha, sorry if ya didn't get that. i'm nah very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    ok, I'm confused as hell... he's seriously standing over the body of his newly murderd ex, dripping with blood, hiding his fangs and get offered practically a tour of planet hollywood? lol! wicked, gotta say, nice description and intro to the characters... s'gon' be good, i can tell.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    lol thanks emma