by Kaitlin Kristina Mar 18, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
You watch her, |
by FTS Miles
Great poem, Kaitlin! It admittedly sounds like it should be a song because it has a wonderful, rhythmic flow. But the message and how it's delivered is the point of mastery. Subtly emotive... sneaks up on you and makes you smile softly, sadly at the poignancy of the final lines. |
Thank you so much Sunny, for the kind words but also for citing the song, the title and singer was evading me. |