by Dawn Manna Mar 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
When I think of all the time we spent holding hands |
by Kevin
That was really good...a little short but really good nonetheless |
by Dawn Manna
thank you for the tips on all of my poems. i love that you are completely honest with me and that you help me write better...i really apprecaite it Katrina. |
shouldnt it be though, not through. good poem though. to much liek a paragraph...maybe spread it out more and it will be great:) |