Comments : I wake up

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another beautiful poem! very well written!

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. You could add more imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe. I hope this happens : ) i can relate to this. great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by James Nguyen

    You're a great poet.. so emotional, all your poems ^_^.. I'm glad you care for this boy alot.

    --James~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    You have a nice sweet style, that's very touching. i liked this poem

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Very good ending, the poem flows well.