by Dawn Manna Mar 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I gave you my all |
by Cella Bella
To me, some of the rhymes seemed forced, but overall the poem itself is really good. great write. 5/5 |
by ShadowDancer
Hmm, i am not a fan of every line rhyming. howevre, most of your rhymes sounded unforced and went smoothly |
by James Nguyen
Very nice.. Yeah, I would never do anything to hurt a woman, and I cease to see why people do this crap.. Love it. =) |
by Emma
Awwe. I love this poem. It's very good...I can relate! You're a great writer.!! |
by Dark Kitten
Good poem. You misspelled throw though. |