I gave it all to you

by Dawn Manna   Mar 18, 2005


I gave you my all
Thinking I wont take the fall
But right from the start
You through daggers at my heart
You told me you truly cared
So many times we shared
All I wanted was someone to hug
A man who wasn’t a thug
But you used me for fun
Now the damage is done
Now I can’t go back
To a time before my world turned black
Boy, you had so many chances,
But you shared with other girls you sweet glances
No one knows how much you hurt me
All I ever wanted was your love to set me free
But love wasn’t on the list
Other girls was who you chose to kiss
So now I must let you go
No love for me ever did you show

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    To me, some of the rhymes seemed forced, but overall the poem itself is really good. great write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Hmm, i am not a fan of every line rhyming. howevre, most of your rhymes sounded unforced and went smoothly

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by James Nguyen

    Very nice.. Yeah, I would never do anything to hurt a woman, and I cease to see why people do this crap.. Love it. =)

    --James~

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awwe. I love this poem. It's very good...I can relate! You're a great writer.!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Good poem. You misspelled throw though.