Thank you for your charms

by deadnalone   Mar 18, 2005


I apologise for the poorness of this one, doesn't seem to flow well.

Hold me in your arms,
Just a little longer,
Stroke my hair again,
Make me feel stronger,

Make me laugh and smile,
Flirt with me a little,
I know you can’t care like I want,
But please warm my heart so brittle,

No one has ever held me,
As much as you do,
Not many people make me smile,
As much as you do too,

Hold me in your arms,
Just a little longer,
Stroke my hair again,
Make me feel stronger,

I don’t know where this came from,
Or why it feels so good,
But I needed someone to hold me,
While my heart mended as it should,

I know I shouldn’t like you,
And we can be no more than good friends,
But you’re always there and hug me,
When it turns bad in the end,

You don’t know why I frown,
You don’t see the scars on my wrists,
But making me feel happy,
Is helping me get over this,

So hold me in your arms once more,
Hold me a little bit longer,
Give me your cheeky grin,
And help me become stronger,

Seeing your smiling face,
Holding me in your arms,
Just thank you for doing this,
Thank you for your charms.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    I dont think it was poor at all!!! I actually loved it!!! Another brlliant poem! Your recent work is all really really good! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    Always a fan!

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    even if it doesnt flow brilliantly, it was still full of emotions and came from the heart which makes it fab. keep smilin hun :D here any time

    lucy lu -x-x-x-