Wonderful.

Very well written! Sad but amazing! It all flowed into each line well, keep it up xxx

I really liked the idea of this poem and the essence it captured great job!!

my only critisizm would be that the lines didnt flow as well as they could have, and they rhyming scheme was off but it really didnt effect how powerful the messege was it was amazing

5/5

aw,....omg, that sent shivers to my spine!!! That was truly dark and your way of describing everything was.....unbelievable. Truly a dark poem.

You're welcome for the comments, but I should be thanking you for your comments. So genuine.

What part of Georgia do you live in? I live in Cobb County, Marietta.

~Sierra

Haha-what happened with the teacher??!!?!?! I think I've heard of that county once or twice.....

~Sierra

lmao!! Well, then its a good thing he was arrested then I guess. Its unhealthy to have a teacher like that, lol. So sorry though!

~Sierra

excellent poem, thanks for reading mine....

Kalika

amazing poem!!

i liked it very much:) keep it up *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

i loved this poem it was great!!
thanx so much for commenting on my poem

I love this poem, reminds so much of one of mine,hmm can't remember the name of it =0/ ups.....Well, very great poem and beautiful too!!! Keep up the good work!!

omg that like stopped my breath.....very powerful poem, keep up the great work....i loved this poem =) ~much love~

-brittnay- ((5/5))