Thanks Sunny!!!!! THat really, really made me smile. You're not as old as you made yourself out to be. I bet that you're a fantastic mom and your children should be so lucky to have you as a mom. I would give almost anything to have someone like you as my mom. Its great that you can remember how bad it really hurts to be so young, because most adults say I'm overreacting all the time, which I may occasinally, but few of them don't try to understand. I'm happy that you like it Sunny, this is the most god honest poem I've written yet, it describes me so well, and anyone who doesn't like this, doesnt like me, and I just can't surround myself with people like that. Thanks for being proud of me!!! =-)!!! Really means a lot to me!!!!

~Sierra~

Wow, Sierra! I'm really proud of you too. This poem was remarkable - I really felt it, you know? Your feelings were evident! If it's any consolation, I am very happy that you are YOU because if you werern't you, I wouldn't know you... you know? ;) I like this a lot. Love ya, mon amie!
Car

lol-thank you both, lol. Hey guess what Mel? Lol-I made peace with Jami. Its all good now between me and her, but I still can't BELIEVE what happened!! Horrible!!!

I especially like the afternote. I think it says more than the entire poem and every word of it was true. I am okay though, i've been better. My stepdad and my brother are leaving for Florida tomorrow and my sister and I are going to be stuck watching my baby brother for a week and my mom is going to have to drop him off at a daycare while we go to school. I guess it'll be cool with him gone-after all, its some of his fault that I'm so screwed up!! So finally, I'll get a taste of the freedom that I've been denied for so long!!! YAY!!!!!!!!

~Sierra

Very good poem sweetie and very well said and very much you. I know its hard being you and not having anyone there understand you but I always have and I always will but I'm just the Nana but I've been there all your life to make sure you're ok so remember that. I love reading your poetry because it gives me in sight into your feelings and I feel it is a great treasure that you trust me with that and feel so very sorry that your mom cares so little that she does not want to know. I can't change her sweetie even if she is mine but I've never condoned what kind of mother she is either and I'm glad you have this site to talk with your friends and say things you're feeling and you know I don't tell anything so you don't have to worry. I just love your work and I sure do love you. Nana

AMAZING!!!!!! it's so emotional, so sad and so beautiful. i can relate. great poem!!! can't wait to read more.
Ariane
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Thanks all!!! Thanks Nana. I'm glad you like my poetry. It all means to much and I want you to be able to write poetry. Just TRY@

lol, Teys, I guess there could be some moral support that came from you. lol-tEyS, I generally only write long poems. They mean so much more to me I guess, I dunno. Thanks!!!!!

Wow that was good, well the first 5 verses or so were. I confess I kinda stop reading around then, but what I read was fantastic!
Take care,
Rachelxx

you kno what ignorant you are like the koolest person on the website and thankx for leaving me that comment really sweet...some things about u that i like~ you know what to say in just the right way especially in your poems and i thought this poem was the greatest i have even put u under my favs KeEp It Up GuRl

plus ur not afraid to show your feelings which is the koolest

great poem, sad too

lol-I don't see what you're talking about, lol, BUT OKAY!!!!! *referring to my talent*

I'm hyper because my mofo stepdad has left for Florida for a week, leaving my sister, me and my mom, hasn't been like this in 4 or 5 years. So I feel free...oh yah, and I had free access to the refrigerator and baked like 3 cakes, and ate some fries and chicken strips just cuz I wanted too. I'm so lucky I'm not a fat @$s. lol. *OOOWOWW HOLY CRAP!! BACK JUST POPPED!! OUWWIES PAIN!!*

I hope you now know why I'm hyper. Just be hyper with me and it'll get all the crap load of trouble off your mind.

Want some cake? Plenty of it!!

~Sierra

I live in Barnesville in Lamar County. We were on the news a few weeks ago we had a teacher arrested.

He took pictures of his... and some girls saw it and reported it. It started in Feb. The school tried to say they didn't do anything at first because they thought it was a rumor since Dec. but that was a lie. We didn't have any rumor about Mr.Byrd til Feb,right before break.It's crazy. He was my 6th period teacher

Yeah well I have to go but check out some more of my poems and comment if you can. I'll read more of yours later when I get back on.

awwwwwww! great poem, i feel exactly the same....