Let Go...

by Lil Luce   Mar 19, 2005


Can't you see I've got to go?
Please! try to understand.
You are finding this hard, I know
but I don't need to hold your hand.

I have my own two feet,
both strong and ready to walk.
I'm ready to face the world and compete,
ready to make my own mark.

This is my dream we're dealing with,
my ambition, my goal.
It's my life! the one for me to live,
the one bursting through my soul.

All I want is to fill you with pride,
not with hurt nor with pain.
but to do this I need you by my side,
because without you I can't gain.

I'm sorry I can't be perfect,
I just need to be free.
I need you to give me some respect,
and to put your trust in me.

We can't keep going on the attack
because it's tearing me apart.
Every argument we have sets me back,
it's shutting down my heart.

I think I know whats on your mind,
I know your biggest fear.
It's of loosing me and being left behind,
but you know I'll always be near.

So please! just let go of my hand,
let me grow, let me fly.
Let me see the world and expand,
I promise this is isn't goodbye!

*** To my mum***

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  • 19 years ago

    by kaufy

    At the begining, I couldn't work out if it was a family member, or possessive boyfriend, but as I read on I could see it was someone who loved you unconditionally and wanted to protect you. And you weren't rebelling and dissappearing, just merely making her understand that there are things you MUST do, and slipping away slowly, but that you would be back all the time.
    BEAUTIFUL- adding you to my favourites.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    I LIKED THIS ONE ALSO... GOOD JOB

    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    I don´t know much about poems, but let me tell you, that this one is one of the best I have read. I think you are a natural writer, and this is a touching-heart poem. Best wishes, please keep on writing, I will keep on reading

  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    Beautiful, and heart tugging it has to be a 5/5
    Doreen.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    yea i did, she cried her eyes out bless her! but she was really greatful! thanks for your comment!
    xxxLoUxxx