by Lil Luce Mar 19, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Can't you see I've got to go? |
by kaufy
At the begining, I couldn't work out if it was a family member, or possessive boyfriend, but as I read on I could see it was someone who loved you unconditionally and wanted to protect you. And you weren't rebelling and dissappearing, just merely making her understand that there are things you MUST do, and slipping away slowly, but that you would be back all the time. |
by Heathergirl
I LIKED THIS ONE ALSO... GOOD JOB |
by Erika
I don´t know much about poems, but let me tell you, that this one is one of the best I have read. I think you are a natural writer, and this is a touching-heart poem. Best wishes, please keep on writing, I will keep on reading |
by D..
Beautiful, and heart tugging it has to be a 5/5 |
by Lil Luce
yea i did, she cried her eyes out bless her! but she was really greatful! thanks for your comment! |