Beautiful Soul

by Heather M Craig   Mar 19, 2005


I gape at your picture trying to look deep down into your eyes,
I can see the pain of a beautiful soul behind the adorable disguise.

The words that melt the pain cascade from that heart of yours,
the combining of our reticent minds seem amazingly insure.

Two broken hearts from flames of love's latter
but a mutual blessing to restore all shatter...

Terrified to love and hold, to cherish and dream
but you hold the "needle" to repatch the tattered seams.

I believe in your heart, I believe in your soul
as I hand you mine to forever hold.

Love has been my phobia of insecure terror
but I do want you to be my heart's sole bearer.

Heather M Craig

*for Shaun, you know I'm scared but I want you too...but we need to talk*

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    your work is so amazing.........thank you for your comments, helped me out a lot......i'll try and not put myself down so much, the confidence thing is just really hard for me right now, but i'll do my best =).......thanks for taking time to give me that nice long comment, it made me feel good, i know its corny, but its true lol.......anyways i wish the best of luck to you and shaun, and i will keep in touch the best i can **hugs**

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    Great poem Heather. It flowed wonderfully and came straight from the heart!
    Much love
    Aaron

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Aww!...He'd be a LUCKY guy..Haha...Great one!

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Heather i love you very much. I enjoyed the poem, your a much better writer of love poems then i am though. hehe, perhaps i will take some lessons from you. I am so glad that you feel the same way.

    Wonderful poem...most no one can see past this disguise i throw up. I am glad you did. I will walk on eggshells with your heart, promise.

    Love you Always.
    Shaun.

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