It is such a pleasure to read your work. Keep em comin.

Her wings were frayed and her soul weak,
Lost in darkness, whispers speak.
I close my eyes, you touch my skin,
Alone, I start to think again.
Fluttered open, darkness stays...
Decisions made, we went our ways.

my favorite stanza...a blessed writer...i was just reading to return the favor, but i enjoyed this immensley...so surreal and intriging...you write beautifully...
lee nicole*
i know my spelling sucks, sorry

Great work!!...Beautifully penned!!..loved this 1!!a 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I loved the meaning of this poem. The rhymes and flow was well done. The structure was good as well. Wonderful write, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

I saw this title and just had to read it beautiful job 5\5 here