I would...
by *tarrann*briann* Mar 19, 2005
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I would have returned your greeting if it wasn't for the way you were looking at me. this street is not a market and i am not a commodity and don't you find it sad that we cant even say hello? we are up against the skin of the guitar in the window of my life looking out through the bars i am sounding out the silence avoiding all the words I'm afraid i can never say enough... all i can really think to say is... "Hello" |
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19 years ago
by pinkalias
I really liked this. A worthy way to exploit your opinion and display how our society has grown into such an individually isolated social interaction which proceeds to cut off real emotions and words and develops more ability to restrain from them, thus continuing to ignore passings.
(correct I hope?)
Also, I admire your symbols greatly. i especially admired the lines,
"we are up against the skin of the guitar in the window of my life looking out through the bars"
I loved those lines.
Well done
