I really liked this. A worthy way to exploit your opinion and display how our society has grown into such an individually isolated social interaction which proceeds to cut off real emotions and words and develops more ability to restrain from them, thus continuing to ignore passings.
(correct I hope?)
Also, I admire your symbols greatly. i especially admired the lines,
"we are up against the skin of the guitar in the window of my life looking out through the bars"
I loved those lines.
Well done