Comments : She sat there crying.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hoover

    Hey, Good Poem
    i gave ya a 5/5
    i'll be looking for the finished version
    keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    oh that was beautiful even if it wasn't finished I truly love it..nice job

    Unloved ♥

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    So long ago there was a girl who smiled
    ANd now shes dead
    Lying in her bed with a razor in her hand
    She cut her wrists to see if he loved her back
    - ME Unloved ♥