by yo yo yo Mar 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
If my bed room walls could talk |
wow...beautiful!!!! absolutely amazing!! keep it up! |
by Megin
that was a really * CUTE * poem!! i really enjoyed reading it! keep up the good work 5/5 |
wow! thats really pretty. i feel like that a lot. keep up the good work! |
I really like this poem. I like how your walls sing, talk and speak. I think it'd be better if maybe your walls could.. shout, or cry or yell. Maybe some more verbs. |
by Eden
I love the concept of this poem. Great job with writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment on mine :) 5 for this one, hun. Awesome |