This is cool, I like the way repitition is used, makes it sound like a song! Well done and thanks for commenting on mine. Take care and keep up the good work. xx

WOW......I really loved this poem Excellent job lov ya :) always

I love the concept of this poem. Great job with writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment on mine :) 5 for this one, hun. Awesome

Eden

I really like this poem. I like how your walls sing, talk and speak. I think it'd be better if maybe your walls could.. shout, or cry or yell. Maybe some more verbs.
Keep up the good work.

wow! thats really pretty. i feel like that a lot. keep up the good work!

that was a really * CUTE * poem!! i really enjoyed reading it! keep up the good work 5/5
xoxo-megan
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wow...beautiful!!!! absolutely amazing!! keep it up!
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