Yo...deep that was...i feel the same....but i have not stoped the scars im glad u have...keep that up...

you go girl!! ahah that was really good I think you should never stop writing cuz ur just so damn GOOD!!

Unloved ♥
+~+~+~+~+~+~+
So long ago there was a girl who smiled
ANd now shes dead
Lying in her bed with a razor in her hand
She cut her wrists to see if he loved her back
- ME Unloved ♥

this was a really great poem!! love it!! it flowed nicely...its sads though, but you just gotta keep your head up..and dont ever feel like you have no one to talk to..im right here sweety.. you can private message me..or if you have yahoo: jerseycutie08..or if you have aim: babystar1257..feel free to contact me whenever...im always here!! keep your head up and take care.. :)

your poem dosnt suck. i feel the same way however i cant say that i have totaly stoped. ..good for you thow. thats great that you have found another way to deal.it takes a lot to stop. well anyway good poem and the best of luck to you.

~!~Noelle~!~

thanks for your comments.

That was so sad u feel the hurt as u read the poem! Writing is a great way to let out your feelings! If u need anyone to talk to e-mail me! Good job on this poem! Take Care of yourself! Brooke

this was a really good poem, it helps me understand the person who wrote it more
it's also good that your writing about stopping the cutting and not carrying on
if you ever need a friend, email me

hey....it doesnt suck i thought it was good.....and i know how it feels not haveing any one to talk to ......so if you ever need any one to talk to im here.....5/5
//.:amanda:.\\

Wow another great poem, so emotional and sad, I love it especially this part:

I crave to still have my skin torn apart
To punish myself for how I feel
But insecurity gets the best of me
And my scars are left to heal

I can totally relate to these lines and the ending too....You have talent, keep writing!!

I love it hun 5/5 u r on my favourites list, i love ur work and i can totally relate to this poem, its like the pain is worse but u can't cut coz u want ur scars to go away so no one will see your wrist! anyways check out my work and i hope your okay! luv Maddison