That was good...but I can't tell ya the answer...hmmmmmmm...great job anyways! |
by katie!
wow, very good, well written with some good lines in it well done |
by *Sherrie*
I liked the stlye you use to write and i ebjoyed this poem, its a good read.... great work... |
Galing pare! It's true, why be just one person when you can be more. |
by girlii797
NICE!!! although, you will have to find yourself. No one can tell you. |
by paulina.♥
I liked it. Kind of short, but good. Thank you for commenting on one of my poems. |
by Robert
You did not stay with one idea you seemed to jump around too fast this was too short and to vauge. I was dissappointed if your going to make a point please make it clear. Read Make The Wolrd Bleed you will see what I mean. Well better luck next time... |