Oh wow, that's simply lovely, wonderful job! though just in my opinion it might be best to write out the words in full. But I give you a five ^_^.

thanks :)

I absolutely loved this poem! If i could give you 100 i would! :)

You do have such emotion in your poems. If you have fell out with your mate I think they shud read this. I can't belieive how good some of your poems really are you do have a way with words. Really. 5/5 yet again from me.
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