Little Girl

This poem was beautiful. i loved it. it flowed really well and i got so into the story of it that i just wanted to keep reading. i know a girl just like this so i pictured her as i read. fantastic job. ive been reading a few of your poems and i really like you writing.
xx

But they'll still leave her
through her tight grasp.

but, should be changed to and in my eyes.

when i comment i tell of visualizations i see.
i see a young girl, maybe in high school, who believes the "cool guys" when they tell her things, and stated in your poems, she goes too far. and in my visualization, i see her walking down the halls, and people are staring at her, shes the s*ut now.

it is very sad. and im not sure if this comes from experience, but if it does, she is lucky to have someone like you to believe in her.
5/5

Beautifully written. it was great, i love the way you write, with the wording and the way you just bring a picture to the readers mind. 5/5

Wow i see my best friend turning into this little girl more and more.. i cant understand why bc she has soo many ppl who care about her so why does she still seek guys attention and her father does so many things with her i really don't get it so i just keep my mouth shut.. and when i do speak up .. i use encouragement as in this poem it seems like she only gets mad at me. so i agree with the poem (ive done this even) but whats after that? something to write about :]
great poem, take care
sarah

its the first poem of yours I have read and I love it you a great writer