very good. keep it up.

Life is tough, but still we have to go through it!!! Great poem, I love it!!!

Wow great poem, nice way to word your fealings keep up the good work, and dont ever lose the fight

great poem! keep it up! 5/5 take a look at mine sometimes if u wana!

much love
savannah

that was well written. life is tough but thats part of life.stay strong hun.. u have an amazing talent
check out some of my work if you'd like

you express your feelings wonderfully.
thanks for sharing it with us.
Marjan