this is so good, i like it keep it up! and thanks so much for your comment it's really appreciated yes I am lucky to have a friend like that i dunno what I'd do without her:) |
by Chelsey
WOW!!! That was excellent! I loved how this poem went..it was like my eyes were bouncing line to line and I didn't want this poem to end..I love poems that make me like that because it shows the talent that the poet has! This was amazing..I am so sorry if you feel that way though..No one on Earth deserves to feel that way..BE strong! |
by SSBAL
this poem is one of my favorites, you are a truely gifted writer, if you dont stay true to yourself and continue to write, you'll regret it, plez let every1 have the honor to read one of your pieces |
Hey darl, |
hey babe, |
by Daniel J
A very moving poem :'( |
by abcede
GREAT TITLE!! that's a great eye-catcher! awesome and awesome poem too! very very creative and original!! good job |
by Scythe
i can relate well with this poem. and btw i love the way the words flow together...well done |
by ASPHYXIATED
WOW! once again great flow!! |