Very Very sad :( Nice and expressive poem.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

So sad and full of emotions....You have so much talnet Katie and I love your work....Don't be sad!!!

Love sabrina

I can really see the pain in this piece. I bet you felt like so much had been released from your shoulders when you finished it. v. good

excellent poem although really sad. i wrote a poem about bullying if you want to read that...its called awake (tis one i wrote few yr ago when my friend at school was being bullied)
i especially like the lines ...
My problems hang around my shoulders
Pulling me down and destroying what I built
Turning me away from who I once was
Drowning me in this agony and filth
... thought they were superb! please comment on my work!
thanks luv
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