Stuck In A Dream

by Pianist   Mar 19, 2005


I once had a dream of a far off land.
The island was perfect, layered with sand.
The hills where lush and bursting with green.
Covered in flowers that I'd never seen.
The ocean was strong, and worked in one flow.
The sky and wind had their gifts to bestow.
The living where gentle, they all got along.
Nothing disrupted the tune of their song.
Then as I dreamt a cloud filled the sky.
My peaceful dream had all been a lie.
The hills wilted, the flowers turned black.
The ocean once strong began to drawback.
The sand blew away and left dry dirt.
The living had quit their graceful concert.
There I was left, remaining to scream.
And to this day, I'm stuck here to dream.

Copyright © 2005 Nobody

-Perceive this dream as what you may, but when you find yourself "Stuck In A Dream," wake yourself up. You are only stuck as long as you allow yourself to be.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael

    I've definitely been in a situation like that...and your comment is very true about only being stuck because we choose to be. You are extremely intelligent...and mysterious too...but mostly intriguing...

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex

    I really enjoy reading poems by you. You have a gd talent for them. Well done keep up the writing. 5/5
    ~@L€X~

  • 19 years ago

    by shellybaby

    i love how you made a climax in your poem so that it went up up up in the readers mind then it went right back down
    could you check out some of my poems and comment it would mean a lot to me i hope you keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    that was a really good poem, i really lkd the way you described things, especially in the begining

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    wow, i love it...normally, i find rhyming poems juvenile, but that one was good, i liked it...5/5 keep it up, and check out some of my stuff if ya want.

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