Wow, that was a really great poem, very well done 5/5

How unique loved it! I would love to be in the place that u were dreaming out in the beginning of ur poem. Sounds so beautiful. Check out my new one My Blessing if u would Thanx! Another great poem love ur work!

Ahhh, how sad! I went from a happy high at the beginning of the poem to a sad stress at the end! Love when poems can make me feel something! Great job! Check out my poetry, please... I think you'll like them! Great job, again!
(Car)

very nice poem

that made me feel...cool!!! lol. i dont know what that meant. that was really an awesome poem. really. it was. i envy the way you put your words. your so talented. really. alrighty then. i gotta go.
amor siempre,
nancy

wow, i love it...normally, i find rhyming poems juvenile, but that one was good, i liked it...5/5 keep it up, and check out some of my stuff if ya want.

that was a really good poem, i really lkd the way you described things, especially in the begining

i love how you made a climax in your poem so that it went up up up in the readers mind then it went right back down
could you check out some of my poems and comment it would mean a lot to me i hope you keep writing

I really enjoy reading poems by you. You have a gd talent for them. Well done keep up the writing. 5/5
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I've definitely been in a situation like that...and your comment is very true about only being stuck because we choose to be. You are extremely intelligent...and mysterious too...but mostly intriguing...