Wow that is awesome. You are really good. I love reading our poems. You are an amzing poet!
*~*Kaori*~*

This is a brilliant piece, but the format of it seems to draw away from that. If you cleaned it up a bit it would be perfect. I like it.

Wow, you're 14? I'm sorry. No offense, it just sounds like you've grown up quick. and I know what that's like.

awesome poem. great read. I sort of want to make it rhymne though. It has a rhthym that demands a power chord.