by Mark Spencer Mar 19, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
In a virgin forest, |
This one is awsome too! you are really good, and write my favorite kind of stuff! 5/5, I love it. The other one was a bit better, but this is really good too. |
Wow, I really liked it. Everything went nicely together. Great job. >3jess |
by paulina.♥
The rhymes and use of words is amazing. But I do not why you used a unicorn. I'm not too "into" fairy tales and imaginary creatures. |
by HOLLY ARMER
I adore this piece...I love fairy tales and fantasy creatures! Very well written~Holly |
by Aubrey
amazing!! great job, flowes nicely!! check mine out sometime, keep up the great work!!!<3 |