Very nice. :)
-A

Hmm, girl, that was just pretty. I love the way you can express your feelings in your poetry! You rock out loud! Oh, and, by the way, Zach says to hang in there and that he loves you lots. (I talked to him on the phone last night) I wish we could talk! r u allowed in the chat rooms? discussion boards? ect.? lol, anyways, great poem, i loved it.
*Carlee*

I go in the discussion boards. I would talk on the phone, but I'd have to do it only when I'm at my Nana's house. My parents will beat me if I cost them long distance. lol. Tell Zac that I love him too, and could you tell him what happened with Nick? Tell him that I'm such an idiot.

lol-I rock out loud? YAH MAN!! lol!! Fun! Chat rooms, no. lol!! Lots of love to both of ya's!! *huggles*

~Sierra

I had a nanna! She used to try to get me away from the abuse in my previous home... loved her to pieces! Will do, altho, you aren't an idiot. Blond moments- they happen to me all the time!

OUT LOUD!!!!
*car*

awesomis!!! lol

Wow. Stunning, beautifully written. This is some serious talent here- and i LOVE your title, I'm a sucker for anything to do with vampires :-)

Wow I just finished reading this poem and I couldn't leave without commenting. This was truely amazing and I loved it. You are an excellent poet, especially for your age. Take care.

I really liked it. It is so different, and that's what makes it so breath-taking. 100/5, amazing.
Luv always, KT

wow, i love vampire storys, this is a brill poem.

Wow that like really well written i loved every piece of it. you right so good girl omg. lov it. xoxox Rach

Wow
great job
love all ur vampire poems
keep it up
:D
xx