A love that couldnt please

by RxQueen   Mar 20, 2005


My tears i cant take back your love which I lacked. My time you wasted my beauty you tasted. My love you stole your a thief but no one knows.
Your lies are what i ate for you I couldn't escape. Are world how I didn't want to leave as you set there watching me bleed. I knew it was gonna end i just hope we could had been friends. To know theres no me and you what more can i do to see thats theres no real truth how can i ever for give you. Its much more pain then it seems to you what did i mean. Was I just there for your fun, for your needs or was i just a love that could not please

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Damn im loving ur poems.... keep writing never stop :)

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    by seaofLoathing

    Every sentence u wrote is truth.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Great poem. It's very powerful. I love it. =]

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    by NIDAL

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leanne

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