Nice poem, very well written. 5/5.
Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Wow, this was really something. Incredible power in this piece... great job!!!!
Car

its been a while since you've been around but you made a great come-around! the poem was wonderful -5

With love,
Heather

omg girl this is so good!!!flows perfectly...loved it!!! take a 5! thnx for commenting...uve got loads of talent!!! will read more of u soon!

Love it! great poem! :)

I feel so sorry about how you feel, and it makes me so sad. Pls tell me this is not kkeping you awake at night, bcs i will be very very sad. Take care my friend.
When will you be 100 yet? Lol

A suberb emotionally charged poem Maybeth your writing continues to improve with your every post girl we must catch up soon babes :o)

Excellent poem; I feel as if you just described how I feel...

Truth is, no one ever forgets... grreat poem

Very well writen i love the last 4 lines :) you are very talented and this poem really touched me...it hit very close to home ...anyway ur an awesome writer and i love your work :D check out mine sometime if you dont mind

xXxStephxXx

Great poem Maybeth! I really liked it a lot! (",)

~Krissy

this poem is beautiful, nice flow and great concept..i love the last stanza..keep writingg