Yummmy! that was hot! Wudn't mind havin u wit me now! Neways 5/5! Gr8 work... Xxx Mia

Thank you for the wonderful compliments!

Damn.. I like the intensness of it.. OMG that waz like a orgasium dream.. keep up the work.. comment me sumtime...MuCh <3

Thank you all once again! Your kind words, make me smile!

I loved your poem that all i'm going to say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was awesome!!!i wish i had u wuth me right now.keep it up.

NEVERMIND!!!it was still a great poem

Clearly a five - WHOA like WHOA

I have goosebumps thats pure brilliance my friend...

f uck me plz!!! lol ace poem keep dem cumin lol xxx

damnn i was feeling that shit! amazing i need to read part one!

Omg this was soo hott, you did a great job part one was great and it left u wanted to read part 2 and three, keep up the good work!!

one of the most steamy poems ive ever read!! yours is way better than mine!! a great follow up of the first part..HOT!!!! keep it up!

vedali

omg, omg, omg, omg. I am so f>cking horny right now!! That was SO HOT!!!

Very good poem. It fits great with the first. 5/5.