She...

by coral   Mar 20, 2005


Can i take it?
Can she take it?
all this fighting is a blur..

she writes about me she talks
to me i guess we are friends
i hope it just ends in friends
between you and her...

Shes a good person to me
will she go behind my back?
Our friendship is fearless our
conversations endless her feelings
our screaming for a break.
who to open her heart up and give it some slack?

*to well you know who you are

* not one of my best works but I'm just tired

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    yea i kno who i am. n no i cant take it but u dont have to worry bout that. im sooo over zack its not even funny n i wish sum 1 would give me sum slack. n im so sorry about everythin and i hope u 4give me
    love always...
    paulette

  • 19 years ago

    by coral

    i can do way much better than this thanx for the comment and vote
    god bless
    coral

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice write, but you can do much more better than this. Thanks for your comment.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

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