Really really really great poem. i loved it and it flowed so nicely. Great job. See Ya!

Every time I read poems about this girl you are in love with, I wish that I could make her love you too, so that you wouldn't be so sad....You deserve it!!!

Great poem Katie.. very good =)

i really like the 5 stanza good job 5/5

Great poem, and u wrote it really well. You can reall feel the pain and frustration. Nice work~!

i just love all of your poems!
5/5 again

great poem, i love it, greatly writen!!!
keep up the great work and thanks for your comment!

~PLP~ Lil slam~ 5/5

good poem. i haven't read any of yours before and im not sure i understand what your saying but i will def read some more because they are great!
Polly ~X~