You

by Kimeko Lancaster   Mar 20, 2005


Can you please read, comment, and vote for this poem it will mean a lot thank you

When I look at you I see more than a man,
I see a wonderful person that I want to hold my hand,
Through all my rights from wrong and all my ups and downs,
I need someone who would stick around,

When I look at you I see my other half,
I see the one that always make me laugh,
The one that can make me smile on my saddest days,
The one that I will Love always,

When I look at you I see more that just Ibn,
I see the person I want to spend the rest of my life with,
To have and to hold for the rest of my life,
I want to more then your women I want to be your wife.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Joel Huch

    very good

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    great poem! i like..and thanks so much for your comment and advice on my poem
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Zoeannjane

    might want to check some spelling errors but a good poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Brilliant poem!!!! :)