What's happening?

by *Melanie*   Mar 21, 2005


I feel so vunerable
so weak and naive
i need a secret hiding place
i need some space to breathe

the walls are finally crashing
the thickness of my skin is gone
it seems to be, in my inner battle,
the dark side has won...

i just have two poems submitted but i would appreciate it if you could give me any feedback, thanks...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Athan

    Nice, i like it, its very....idk, i guess cool, hahaha

  • 19 years ago

    by bill

    very nice

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Another amazing piece, I can really relate, 5/5
    -xx-
    Broken

  • 19 years ago

    by *Melanie*

    thanks alot, it's good to know people can relate. your poems are very pretty good as well...
    *mel

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey this is perty good...i can relate...keep ur head up...thingz will get better...keep on writing and take care...
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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