Comments : Back stab

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    nice poem...powerful...words....

    although... the part of... back...and lack...ryhme seems forced...

    overall a nice poem....

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    We were best friends you and I,
    but now your like a painful sty
    The memories are like broken glass, times I wanted so badly to pass by.

    i think this rhymes right ?
    poem is lovely !
    god bless
    amy