hey, great poem... keep your head up high... all of us deserve a great life and who knows, we just might get it some day... i'm here to talk ~ Tina

Wow, this was great. I really loved it... you are a great poet. Keep your chin up, hon, and keep writing!
Car

hey Amy, i think a lot of us look at ourselves and wonder why we are holding on when there seemingly is no reason anymore, but you've got to hold on, because if you dont hold on you will never know how your storey ends and believe it or not there are people out there who care for you and in some way need you, excellent poem maybe I've read it wrong but thats how it came across to me 5/5

Love, Peace and Empathy

Cantchangeme

Well i know this feeling all to well but as cantchangeme says we just have to hold on... I liked your poem and it was very moving, I gave it 5.

P.S i will read your other poems soon...