hey.. this comment has nuthin to do with ur poem, i just wanted to comment on one of ur quotes.... "alwayz hold on to ur 1st love".... i totally dissagree with u.... im trying so hard to let go of my first love coz he just left me - he sed he no longer loved me.. now hes with sum1 i used to consider a friend..... but its no good trying to keep my feelings for him.... i've established a friendship between me n him... and im dealing with it coz i know thats all im guna be to him- a friend.... i got so sik n tired of waiting around for him to realise that he lost the best thing life could offer him- me...... sorry for goin about sh#t.. but i just wanted to say that u shouldnt alwayz hold onto ur 1st love...