Love it:) sad though...
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Great poem. A lot of emotion. Very sad. Keep this up!

Love,
Tiff

Good poem but in a few places the flow was choppy and it didn't hold my attention in certain parts.....those two i think you need to work on but other then that it was pretty good!! Keep writing!

I truely enjoyed this... your poem had a way of pulling me, I didnt want to stop...Great work...Xox Sherrie

this is a good poem!plz read my poem never!!!!thanx!!!

I like this poem it make me think about my old friend!!! keep up the good work

Great poem. I really liked the last stanza because that is how much I used to care about someone. I love this poem. Please keep writting. 5/5