Suicide Love

by Barbara Jean   Mar 21, 2005


I want to die
just over one little lie

I loved him with all my heart
now I'm sitten here torn apart

I cant go on with my life
sitting here fixing to cut with this knife

I know this is wrong
but if i do this my soul can go on

I dont want to keep this pain
all it did was drive me insane

I cut my self so deep
my hole body started to get weak

POOR RHYME I KNOW BUT DONT CARE..

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  • 19 years ago

    by otto

    it seems to me that you know the things that roam within your heart, the way you bring them to life-that's good writting, I like how you write

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    it's good.I liked it.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Well done.... I enjoyed it...

  • 19 years ago

    by chibi

    as much as i dont believe in these type of sayings, i have this wierd thing, i can tell what will happen, if you just listen to this saying

    "in the end itll all be ok....if its not ok, its not the end"

    i know youll be ok, i know everyone will, but i guess everyone forgot to include me.

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