as much as i dont believe in these type of sayings, i have this wierd thing, i can tell what will happen, if you just listen to this saying

"in the end itll all be ok....if its not ok, its not the end"

i know youll be ok, i know everyone will, but i guess everyone forgot to include me.

Well done.... I enjoyed it...

it's good.I liked it.

it seems to me that you know the things that roam within your heart, the way you bring them to life-that's good writting, I like how you write