Nice write, keep writing. Very good poem.

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit

Wow. That was really good! Check mine out sometime. Keep up the grreat work!!

xoxo
Aubs

So sweet I would speak up. This was written with such true feeling. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

i lvoe this poem!! ver well written.. i esp. love these lines:

"...You make me feel so week
All because you are the one my eye sight seeks..."

i love that part because i know how you feel!! lovely work, keep it up!! :) take care.

yeah, mistakes** its supposed to say "love" and "very" lol..my bad. well great poem!! :)