by kaufy Mar 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I came home and started to cry. |
by hussain
i can really feel the emotions as i read this one...this is truly great poem...and i hope things are ok now for u... |
by Lil Luce
superb!!!such emotion! well done! |
by Dorotea©
Very good poem. Beautiful. I've felt like that too so I can relate. I especially liked the beginning of the poem because it was written very well. Keep on writing, you have talent. |
by katie!
Well done again, I really enjoy your work, I liked the second stanza the most on this one, good work |